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# Tone & Voice Guide
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Complete guide to developing and maintaining consistent voice and tone in your content.
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## Voice vs. Tone
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### Voice
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**Your brand's personality** - consistent across all content
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**Think of it as:**
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- Who you are as a brand
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- Your character
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- Never changes
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**Examples:**
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- Mailchimp: "Friendly, helpful, human"
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- Stripe: "Direct, technical, trustworthy"
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- Nike: "Inspirational, motivational, bold"
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### Tone
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**How voice adapts** to context - changes based on situation
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**Think of it as:**
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- Your emotional state
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- How you say something
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- Varies by context
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**Examples:**
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- **Error message:** Apologetic, helpful
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- **Success message:** Congratulatory, encouraging
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- **Technical docs:** Professional, precise
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- **Marketing:** Enthusiastic, persuasive
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**Analogy:**
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Voice = Your personality
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Tone = Your mood
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## Defining Your Voice
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### Voice Attributes Framework
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Choose 3-4 core attributes that define your brand voice:
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**The Spectrum:**
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```
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Formal ←────────────→ Casual
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Serious ←────────────→ Funny
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Respectful ←────────────→ Irreverent
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Enthusiastic ←────────────→ Matter-of-fact
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Traditional ←────────────→ Innovative
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```
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### Example Voice Definitions
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**Mailchimp:**
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- Friendly but not silly
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- Clever but not overly witty
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- Helpful but not overbearing
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- Expert but not bossy
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**Slack:**
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- Professional but approachable
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- Technical but not intimidating
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- Playful but not childish
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- Direct but not cold
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**Atlassian:**
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- Straightforward and honest
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- Enthusiastically professional
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- Conversational yet informative
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- Smart but not condescending
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## Voice Dimensions
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### 1. Formality
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**Formal:**
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- Professional language
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- Complete sentences
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- No contractions
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- Third person
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**Example:**
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"The application has been successfully deployed to the production environment."
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**Casual:**
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- Conversational language
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- Contractions okay
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- First/second person
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- Shorter sentences
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**Example:**
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"You're all set! Your app is live."
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**When to use:**
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- Formal: Legal, compliance, enterprise docs
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- Casual: Blogs, social media, onboarding
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### 2. Enthusiasm
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**Highly Enthusiastic:**
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- Exclamation points
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- Superlatives (amazing, incredible)
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- Energy and excitement
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- Emojis (in appropriate contexts)
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**Example:**
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"This is amazing! You just saved 10 hours of work. Let's celebrate! 🎉"
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**Neutral/Matter-of-fact:**
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- Period instead of exclamation
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- Factual statements
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- No hyperbole
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- Professional tone
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**Example:**
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"The task has been completed successfully. You saved 10 hours."
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**When to use:**
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- Enthusiastic: Consumer products, celebrations, achievements
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- Neutral: Technical docs, business content, data reports
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### 3. Technical Level
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**Highly Technical:**
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- Industry jargon
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- Assumes expert knowledge
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- Technical accuracy paramount
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- Detailed specifications
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**Example:**
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"The WebSocket connection establishes a persistent, full-duplex communication channel over a single TCP connection."
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**Accessible:**
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- Plain language
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- Explain jargon
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- Analogies and examples
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- Beginner-friendly
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**Example:**
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"WebSockets let your app and server talk back and forth in real-time, like a phone call instead of sending letters."
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**When to use:**
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- Technical: API docs, developer tools, architecture guides
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- Accessible: Getting started guides, general audience, marketing
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### 4. Humor
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**Funny/Playful:**
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- Jokes and puns
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- Pop culture references
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- Light-hearted
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- Personality shines
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**Example:**
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"Oops! Looks like something went wrong. Our bad. We're on it faster than you can say 'Have you tried turning it off and on again?'"
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**Serious:**
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- Professional
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- No jokes
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- Straightforward
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- Business-like
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**Example:**
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"An error has occurred. Our team has been notified and is working to resolve the issue."
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**When to use:**
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- Playful: Consumer brands, creative industries, social media
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- Serious: Financial services, healthcare, legal, critical errors
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## Writing in Your Voice
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### Voice Checklist
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For every piece of content, ask:
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- [ ] **Does this sound like us?** (matches voice attributes)
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- [ ] **Is it consistent** with previous content?
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- [ ] **Would our audience recognize us** without our logo?
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- [ ] **Does it feel authentic** or forced?
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### Voice Examples by Sentence
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**Same content, different voices:**
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**Topic: User made an error**
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**Mailchimp (friendly, helpful):**
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"Oops! It looks like that email address isn't quite right. Try checking for typos?"
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**Stripe (direct, technical):**
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"Invalid email format. Use format: user@example.com"
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**Innocent (playful, quirky):**
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"That email address looks a bit wonky. Give it another go?"
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**IBM (formal, professional):**
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"The email address entered is invalid. Please verify and try again."
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## Adapting Tone
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### Tone Guidelines by Context
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| Context | Tone | Example |
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| **Error message** | Apologetic, helpful | "Sorry about that! Here's how to fix it..." |
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| **Success** | Encouraging | "Nice work! You're all set." |
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| **Warning** | Urgent but calm | "Action required: Your payment failed." |
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| **Education** | Patient, clear | "Let's walk through this together." |
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| **Marketing** | Persuasive, exciting | "Transform your workflow in minutes!" |
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| **Legal** | Formal, precise | "By continuing, you agree to the terms." |
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| **Support** | Empathetic, solution-focused | "I understand this is frustrating. Let's solve it." |
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## Person & Perspective
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### First Person (We, Our)
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**When to use:**
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- Brand speaking
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- Company announcements
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- Team perspective
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**Example:**
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"We're excited to announce our new feature. We built this based on your feedback."
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**Pros:**
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- Personal connection
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- Shows team behind brand
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- Takes ownership
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**Cons:**
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- Can feel self-focused
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- Less about user
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### Second Person (You, Your)
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**When to use:**
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- Most common
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- User instructions
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- Direct communication
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- Marketing copy
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**Example:**
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"You can now collaborate in real-time. Your team will love it."
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**Pros:**
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- User-focused
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- Clear and direct
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- Creates connection
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**Cons:**
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- Can feel pushy if overused
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### Third Person (They, User, Customer)
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**When to use:**
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- Documentation
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- Objective content
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- Case studies about others
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**Example:**
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"The user navigates to settings. The system validates their credentials."
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**Pros:**
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- Professional
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- Objective
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- Clear for documentation
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**Cons:**
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- Less personal
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- Can feel distant
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## Active vs. Passive Voice
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### Active Voice (Preferred)
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**Structure:** Subject performs action
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**Examples:**
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- "You can deploy your app in minutes."
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- "The system processes your request."
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- "Click the button to continue."
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**Why use:**
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- Clearer
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- More direct
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- Easier to read
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- Stronger
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### Passive Voice (Avoid Usually)
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**Structure:** Action performed on subject
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**Examples:**
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- "Your app can be deployed in minutes."
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- "Your request is processed by the system."
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- "The button should be clicked to continue."
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**When to use:**
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- Actor unknown: "The server was restarted."
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- Actor irrelevant: "The file was deleted."
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- Soften message: "An error was encountered."
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## Sentence Structure
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### Short Sentences
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- Easy to read
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- Scannable
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- Mobile-friendly
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- Clear
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**Example:**
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"Deploy your app fast. No config needed. It just works."
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**When to use:**
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- Headlines
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- Key points
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- Mobile content
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- Emphasis
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### Varied Length
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- More natural
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- Maintains interest
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- Provides rhythm
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**Example:**
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"Deploy your app fast. No configuration needed, no complicated setup process, no hours wasted on devops. It just works."
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**When to use:**
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- Blog posts
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- Long-form content
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- Storytelling
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## Word Choice
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### Simple vs. Complex
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**Prefer simple:**
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- Use vs. utilize
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- Help vs. assist
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- Buy vs. purchase
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- Start vs. commence
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- Show vs. demonstrate
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**Exception:** Technical accuracy requires specific terms
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### Positive vs. Negative
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**Positive framing (preferred):**
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- "Remember your password"
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- "Include your address"
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- "Make sure to save"
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**Negative framing (avoid):**
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- "Don't forget your password"
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- "Don't leave out your address"
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- "Don't lose your work"
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### Concrete vs. Abstract
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**Concrete (preferred):**
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- "Save 10 hours per week"
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- "Deploy in 5 minutes"
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- "99.9% uptime"
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**Abstract (avoid):**
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- "Save time"
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- "Fast deployment"
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- "Reliable service"
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## Common Writing Guidelines
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### Contractions
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**Use them for conversational tone:**
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- Don't vs. Do not
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- You're vs. You are
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- We've vs. We have
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**Skip them for:**
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- Legal content
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- Very formal contexts
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- When emphasis needed: "Do not delete this"
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### Exclamation Points
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**Use sparingly:**
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- Celebrations and achievements
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- Very exciting news
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- Strong emphasis
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**Limit to:**
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- Once per paragraph max
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- Never multiple (!!!)
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- Not in B2B formal content
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### Emojis
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**When appropriate:**
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- Consumer brands
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- Casual social media
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- Internal communications
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- In-app celebrations
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**Avoid in:**
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- Enterprise B2B
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- Documentation
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- Legal/compliance
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- Serious topics
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## Brand Voice Examples
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### Technology/Developer Tools
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**Stripe:**
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- **Voice:** Direct, technical, trustworthy
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- **Example:** "Accept payments in minutes. Get started with a few lines of code."
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- **Why it works:** Developers want clarity and speed
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**Vercel:**
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- **Voice:** Modern, enthusiastic, technical
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- **Example:** "Deploy your Next.js app. It's crazy fast."
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- **Why it works:** Balances technical and excitement
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**Twilio:**
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- **Voice:** Friendly, technical, empowering
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- **Example:** "Build the future of communications. We make it simple."
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- **Why it works:** Technical but approachable
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### Consumer Products
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**Mailchimp:**
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- **Voice:** Friendly, helpful, sometimes quirky
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- **Example:** "That email looks a bit wonky. Want to check it?"
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- **Why it works:** Makes tedious tasks feel human
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**Slack:**
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- **Voice:** Professional-casual, helpful, clear
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- **Example:** "Work, simplified. Your team will thank you."
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- **Why it works:** Professional without being stuffy
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**Headspace:**
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- **Voice:** Calm, supportive, encouraging
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- **Example:** "Take a moment for yourself. You deserve it."
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- **Why it works:** Matches meditation/wellness mission
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### Enterprise/B2B
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**Salesforce:**
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- **Voice:** Professional, empowering, visionary
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- **Example:** "Transform your business. Connect with customers in a whole new way."
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- **Why it works:** Aspirational but credible
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**Atlassian:**
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- **Voice:** Straightforward, enthusiastic, smart
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- **Example:** "Teamwork doesn't have to be hard. Let's make it easier."
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- **Why it works:** Acknowledges real problems, offers solutions
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## Developing Your Voice
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### Step 1: Define Core Attributes
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Choose 3-4 from these dimensions:
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**Formality:**
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- Formal, professional, casual, conversational
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**Humor:**
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- Serious, playful, witty, irreverent
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**Enthusiasm:**
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- Energetic, neutral, understated
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**Technical:**
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- Expert, accessible, simple
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**Empathy:**
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- Warm, neutral, distant
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### Step 2: Create Voice Chart
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| Attribute | We are | We are not | Example |
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| Professional | Clear and helpful | Stuffy or robotic | "Here's how to..." not "One must..." |
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| Friendly | Warm and welcoming | Overly casual | "Welcome!" not "Sup!" |
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| Technical | Accurate and precise | Jargon-heavy | Explain terms first time |
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### Step 3: Write Examples
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For each voice attribute, write before/after examples:
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**Before (generic):**
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"Our platform provides solutions for your business needs."
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**After (our voice - direct, technical, helpful):**
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"Deploy your apps faster with built-in CI/CD and automatic scaling."
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### Step 4: Create Voice Guidelines
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Document:
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- [ ] Core voice attributes (3-4)
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- [ ] Do's and don'ts
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- [ ] Example sentences
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- [ ] Tone by context
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- [ ] Word choice preferences
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- [ ] Grammar rules (contractions, etc.)
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## Testing Your Voice
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### Voice Consistency Check
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1. **Remove branding** from 5 pieces of content
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2. **Mix with competitors'** content
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3. **Can people identify yours?**
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If yes → Voice is distinctive
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If no → Need stronger voice
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### Reader Feedback
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Ask your audience:
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- How would you describe our voice?
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- Does it match your expectations?
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- What do you like/dislike?
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## Maintaining Voice
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### Team Alignment
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**Onboarding:**
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- Share voice guidelines
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- Review examples
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- Practice exercises
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**Review Process:**
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- Check content against voice guidelines
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- Provide specific feedback
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- Create a voice champion
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**Documentation:**
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- Voice guidelines in shared doc
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- Examples library
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- Regular updates
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### Voice Evolution
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**When to evolve:**
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- Rebranding
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- New audience
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- Company maturity
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- Market shift
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**How to evolve:**
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- Document changes
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- Transition gradually
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- Update guidelines
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- Train team
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**What to keep:**
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- Core personality
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- Brand values
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- Recognition
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## Voice Guidelines Template
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```markdown
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# [Brand] Voice & Tone Guide
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## Our Voice
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[Brand] sounds [attribute], [attribute], and [attribute].
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### Core Attributes
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**1. [Attribute Name]**
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- What it means: [Description]
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- We are: [Example]
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- We're not: [Counter-example]
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**2. [Attribute Name]**
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[Repeat]
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**3. [Attribute Name]**
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[Repeat]
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## Grammar & Mechanics
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- Contractions: [Yes/No]
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- Exclamation points: [Use sparingly/Never/Frequently]
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- Emojis: [Appropriate contexts]
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- Person: [First/Second/Third]
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- Active voice: [Always/Usually/Varies]
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## Tone by Context
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| Context | Tone | Example |
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| Error | Apologetic | "Sorry about that..." |
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| Success | Encouraging | "Nice work!" |
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| Documentation | Clear | "Follow these steps:" |
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## Word Choices
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**Preferred:**
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- [Word 1] over [Word 2]
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- [Word 3] over [Word 4]
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**Avoid:**
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- [Words/phrases to avoid]
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## Examples
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### Good Examples
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[3-5 examples that nail the voice]
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### Before/After
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**Before:** [Generic version]
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**After:** [Our voice version]
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```
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**Remember:** Your voice should feel authentic, not forced. If it doesn't feel like "you," it won't resonate with your audience.
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