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# Clarity and Style
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## Overview
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Write documentation that readers can **immediately act on**. Core principle: Every abstract concept needs a concrete, runnable example. Every audience needs information in their language.
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**Key insight**: Good writing = easy scanning + clear actions + adapted to reader's context.
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## When to Use
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Load this skill when:
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- Writing documentation (README, API docs, runbooks, ADRs)
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- Reviewing documentation for clarity
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- Explaining technical concepts to different audiences
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- Creating user guides or tutorials
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**Symptoms you need this**:
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- Documentation says "configure appropriately" without showing how
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- Passive voice everywhere ("tests should be run" vs "run tests")
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- Same explanation for developers and executives
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- Wall-of-text paragraphs without headings
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- Jargon without definitions
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**Don't use for**:
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- Code comments (use standard practices)
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- Commit messages (use conventional commits)
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- Chat/email (conversational style different)
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## Core Patterns
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### Pattern 1: Active Voice (Who Does What)
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**Rule**: Subject performs action directly. "X does Y", not "Y is done by X".
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| Passive (❌) | Active (✅) |
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|-------------|-----------|
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| "The token is validated by the system" | "The system validates the token" |
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| "Tests should be run with pytest" | "Run tests with pytest" |
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| "The configuration file is read at startup" | "The application reads the config file at startup" |
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| "Rate limiting can be configured" | "Configure rate limiting with environment variables" |
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| "Errors are logged to CloudWatch" | "The service logs errors to CloudWatch" |
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**Why**: Active voice shows WHO/WHAT does the action, making responsibilities clear.
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**Common passive constructions to avoid**:
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- "should be done" → "do X"
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- "is processed by" → "X processes"
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- "can be configured" → "configure X with Y"
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- "is validated" → "the service validates"
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**When passive is okay**: When actor is unknown or irrelevant:
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- "The server was compromised" (attacker unknown)
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- "The file was deleted" (focus on state change, not actor)
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### Pattern 2: Concrete Examples (Show, Don't Tell)
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**Rule**: Every instruction needs a runnable example. Never say "configure" without showing exact config.
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| Abstract (❌) | Concrete (✅) |
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|--------------|-------------|
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| "Set the timeout appropriately" | "Set `API_TIMEOUT=30` in `.env` for 30-second timeout" |
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| "Configure the database connection" | "Set `DATABASE_URL=postgresql://user:pass@localhost:5432/dbname`" |
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| "Run the tests" | "Run `pytest tests/ -v` from project root" |
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| "Increase the rate limit" | "Set `RATE_LIMIT=1000` (requests per hour) in `config.yml`" |
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| "Handle errors properly" | "Wrap API calls in try/except and log to CloudWatch:\n```python\ntry:\n response = api.call()\nexcept APIError as e:\n logger.error(f\"API failed: {e}\")\n```" |
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**Pattern**: [Abstract concept] + [Concrete example] + [Expected outcome]
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**Example**:
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```markdown
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Configure rate limiting (concept) by setting `RATE_LIMIT=1000` in `.env` (example).
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The API will reject requests after 1000/hour per client (outcome).
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```
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**When to provide examples**:
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- Commands to run
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- Config values to set
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- API calls to make
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- Error messages you'll see
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- File paths to check
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**Example formats**:
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- Code blocks for commands: `` `pytest tests/` ``
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- File snippets for config
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- API request/response pairs
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- Before/after comparisons
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### Pattern 3: Progressive Disclosure (Essentials First, Details On-Demand)
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**Rule**: Start with minimum viable information. Provide detail progressively, not all at once.
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**Structure**:
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```
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1. One-sentence summary (what it is)
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2. Minimal quick start (get started in <5 min)
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3. Common use cases (cover 80% of users)
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4. Advanced topics (expandable sections or separate pages)
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5. Complete reference (link to API docs/spec)
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```
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**Example: Rate Limiting Documentation**
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❌ **Bad (Everything Upfront)**:
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```markdown
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# Rate Limiting
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Rate limiting is implemented using a token bucket algorithm with distributed
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state management via Redis Cluster. The system tracks requests per client using
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API keys extracted from the Authorization header or IP addresses for unauthenticated
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requests. Limits are enforced using sliding windows with configurable window sizes
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(1 hour, 1 day, 1 month) and multiple tiers (Free: 100/hour, Pro: 10k/hour,
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Enterprise: custom). When limits are exceeded, the API returns 429 with Retry-After
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header calculated based on the token bucket refill rate. The system supports
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distributed deployments with eventual consistency guarantees and graceful degradation
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when Redis is unavailable by falling back to in-memory rate limiting...
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```
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✅ **Good (Progressive Disclosure)**:
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```markdown
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# Rate Limiting
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The API limits requests to prevent abuse. Free tier: 100 requests/hour.
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## Quick Start
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Check your remaining quota:
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\`\`\`bash
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curl -i https://api.example.com/status
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# See X-RateLimit-Remaining header
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\`\`\`
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## What Happens When Limited
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API returns 429 status. Wait time shown in `Retry-After` header (seconds).
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## Rate Limit Tiers
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| Tier | Limit | Use Case |
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|------|-------|----------|
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| Free | 100/hour | Development |
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| Pro | 10k/hour | Production |
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| Enterprise | Custom | High volume |
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<details>
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<summary>Advanced: How It Works</summary>
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Uses token bucket algorithm with Redis. Sliding windows, distributed state...
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[Technical details here]
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</details>
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<details>
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<summary>Advanced: Custom Limits</summary>
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Contact sales@example.com for Enterprise tier with negotiated limits...
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</details>
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```
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**Benefits**:
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- New users get started in 30 seconds (check header)
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- 80% of users find answer in main sections (tiers, what happens when limited)
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- 20% power users access advanced details (expandable)
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- Nobody is overwhelmed with token buckets upfront
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### Pattern 4: Audience Adaptation (Write for Your Reader)
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**Rule**: Same information, different framing for different audiences.
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**Three primary audiences**:
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#### Developer Audience
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**What they need**: HOW it works (architecture, APIs, code examples, data flows)
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**Style**:
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- Technical precision
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- Code examples first
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- Architecture diagrams
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- API reference details
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- Error codes and debugging
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**Example**:
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```markdown
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## Authentication (For Developers)
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API uses JWT with RS256 signing.
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**Request**:
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\`\`\`bash
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curl -H "Authorization: Bearer eyJhbG..." https://api.example.com/users
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\`\`\`
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**Token structure**:
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\`\`\`json
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{
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"sub": "user_12345",
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"scope": ["read:users", "write:posts"],
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"exp": 1730145600
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}
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\`\`\`
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**Validation process**:
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1. Extract token from Authorization header
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2. Verify signature using public key (fetch from `/keys`)
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3. Check expiration (`exp` claim > current time)
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4. Verify scopes match endpoint requirements
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**Errors**:
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- 401: Invalid signature or expired token
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- 403: Valid token but insufficient scopes
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```
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#### Operator Audience
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**What they need**: HOW to run it (deployment, configuration, monitoring, troubleshooting)
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**Style**:
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- Step-by-step procedures
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- Config file examples
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- Monitoring queries
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- Troubleshooting checklists
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- Runbooks for incidents
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**Example**:
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```markdown
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## Authentication (For Operators)
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### Deployment
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1. Generate RSA keypair:
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\`\`\`bash
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ssh-keygen -t rsa -b 4096 -f jwt-key
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\`\`\`
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2. Set environment variables:
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\`\`\`bash
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JWT_PUBLIC_KEY_PATH=/etc/app/jwt-key.pub
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JWT_ALGORITHM=RS256
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TOKEN_EXPIRY_SECONDS=3600
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\`\`\`
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3. Restart service:
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\`\`\`bash
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systemctl restart api-service
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\`\`\`
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### Monitoring
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**Alert on high auth failures**:
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\`\`\`promql
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rate(auth_failures_total[5m]) > 10
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\`\`\`
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### Troubleshooting
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**Symptom**: All requests returning 401
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**Check**:
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1. Public key readable? `ls -la /etc/app/jwt-key.pub`
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2. Service logs: `journalctl -u api-service | grep JWT`
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3. Key format correct? Should be PEM format, not binary
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```
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#### Executive Audience
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**What they need**: WHY it matters (business value, risks, costs, timelines)
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**Style**:
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- High-level summaries (no technical jargon)
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- Business impact (revenue, risk, customer satisfaction)
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- Costs and ROI
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- Timeline and milestones
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- No implementation details
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**Example**:
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```markdown
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## Authentication (For Executives)
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### Business Impact
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**Security**: JWT authentication prevents unauthorized access to customer data,
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reducing breach risk and regulatory liability.
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**Cost**: Industry-standard implementation, no licensing fees. Scales to millions
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of users with existing infrastructure.
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**Customer Experience**: Users stay logged in for 1 hour without re-authentication,
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reducing friction while maintaining security.
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### Risk Mitigation
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- **Before**: API keys in URLs, logged in plaintext, exposed in browser history
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- **After**: Short-lived tokens, signed cryptographically, revocable
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### Timeline
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- Implementation: 2 weeks
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- Migration: 1 week (parallel run with old system)
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- Full rollout: 1 week
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**Investment**: 4 engineering weeks ($40k)
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**Risk reduction**: Avoid potential $2M+ breach costs (industry average)
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```
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### Pattern 5: Precision Without Jargon
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**Rule**: Be technically accurate using accessible language. Define acronyms on first use.
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| Jargon-Heavy (❌) | Precise & Clear (✅) |
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|------------------|---------------------|
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| "Utilize the ingress controller to facilitate external traffic ingress" | "Use the ingress controller to route external traffic into the cluster" |
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| "Implement idempotency semantics" | "Make requests safe to retry - calling twice produces same result" |
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| "Leverage the ORM abstraction layer" | "Use the ORM (Object-Relational Mapping) to query the database with Python code instead of SQL" |
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| "Instantiate a singleton factory pattern" | "Create one shared instance that all code uses (singleton pattern)" |
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**Pattern for acronyms**: Full term (Acronym) on first use, acronym thereafter.
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**Examples**:
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- First use: "JWT (JSON Web Token)"
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- Later: "JWT"
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- First use: "SLA (Service Level Agreement)"
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- Later: "SLA"
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**Simplification checklist**:
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- Replace "utilize" → "use"
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- Replace "facilitate" → "help" or "enable"
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- Replace "instantiate" → "create"
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- Replace "leverage" → "use"
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- Define domain terms: "idempotency means safe to retry"
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**When jargon is okay**: When writing for technical audience and term is standard.
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- "JWT" in developer docs (industry standard)
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- "Kubernetes Pod" in operator docs (specific technical concept)
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- "SQL injection" in security docs (precise attack name)
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### Pattern 6: Scannable Structure
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**Rule**: Use headings, bullets, tables, code blocks. Make key information findable in <10 seconds.
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**Scannable elements**:
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- ✅ Headings (H2, H3) for sections
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- ✅ Bullet points for lists
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- ✅ Tables for comparisons
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- ✅ Code blocks for commands/examples
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- ✅ **Bold** for key terms (use sparingly)
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- ✅ Short paragraphs (3-5 sentences max)
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**Anti-patterns**:
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- ❌ Wall-of-text paragraphs (>10 lines)
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- ❌ **Everything in bold** (loses emphasis)
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- ❌ No headings (can't scan)
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- ❌ Inline code for long examples (use blocks)
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**Example: Scannable vs Not**
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❌ **Not Scannable**:
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```markdown
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When you need to deploy the application you should first make sure that Docker
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is installed on your system and then you need to clone the repository from GitHub
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and after that you should copy the .env.example file to .env and edit it to set
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your database credentials and API keys and then you can run docker-compose up -d
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to start the containers in detached mode and then wait for the database to
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initialize which usually takes about 30 seconds and then you can run the migrations
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with docker-compose exec app python manage.py migrate...
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```
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✅ **Scannable**:
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```markdown
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## Deployment Steps
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### Prerequisites
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- Docker installed
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- GitHub access
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### Setup
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1. Clone repository:
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\`\`\`bash
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git clone https://github.com/org/app.git
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\`\`\`
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2. Configure environment:
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\`\`\`bash
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cp .env.example .env
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# Edit .env: Set DATABASE_URL and API_KEY
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\`\`\`
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3. Start services:
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\`\`\`bash
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docker-compose up -d
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# Wait 30 seconds for database initialization
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\`\`\`
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4. Run migrations:
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\`\`\`bash
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docker-compose exec app python manage.py migrate
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\`\`\`
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### Verification
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Check services are running:
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\`\`\`bash
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docker-compose ps
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# All services should show "Up"
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\`\`\`
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```
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**Why scannable works**:
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- Find information in <10 seconds (headings)
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- Copy commands directly (code blocks)
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- See prerequisites before starting (avoids mid-process failures)
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- Numbered steps (clear sequence)
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- Verification step (know when done)
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## Quick Reference: Clarity Checklist
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Use this checklist when writing or reviewing documentation:
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| Check | Pattern | Example |
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|-------|---------|---------|
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| ✅ Active voice | "X does Y" not "Y is done" | "Run tests" not "tests should be run" |
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| ✅ Concrete examples | Every instruction has runnable example | "Set `API_KEY=abc123`" not "configure API key" |
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| ✅ Progressive disclosure | Essentials first, details expandable | Quick start → Use cases → Advanced (collapsed) |
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| ✅ Audience adapted | Sections for Dev/Ops/Exec as needed | "For Developers: API details" / "For Execs: Business impact" |
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| ✅ Acronyms defined | Full term (Acronym) on first use | "JWT (JSON Web Token)" then "JWT" |
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| ✅ Scannable structure | Headings, bullets, tables, code blocks | H2 sections, bullet lists, comparison tables |
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| ✅ Short paragraphs | 3-5 sentences max | Break up walls of text |
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| ✅ Bold for emphasis | Key terms only, not whole paragraphs | **Important:** not **everything** |
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## Common Mistakes
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### ❌ Passive Voice Throughout
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**Wrong**:
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```markdown
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The database should be configured before the application is started.
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Tests can be run after deployment is completed.
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```
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**Right**:
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```markdown
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Configure the database before starting the application.
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Run tests after completing deployment.
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```
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**Why**: Active voice shows WHO does WHAT, making actions clear.
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### ❌ Abstract Instructions Without Examples
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**Wrong**:
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```markdown
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Configure rate limiting appropriately for your use case.
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```
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**Right**:
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```markdown
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Configure rate limiting by setting `RATE_LIMIT=1000` (requests/hour) in `config.yml`:
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\`\`\`yaml
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rate_limiting:
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limit: 1000 # requests per hour
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window: 3600 # seconds
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\`\`\`
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```
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**Why**: Readers need concrete examples to act on.
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### ❌ Same Content for All Audiences
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**Wrong**:
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```markdown
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# Authentication
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Uses JWT with RS256 signature algorithm, 3600-second expiry, and refresh token rotation.
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```
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**Right**:
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```markdown
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# Authentication
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**For Developers**: Uses JWT with RS256. Token expires in 1 hour. Refresh tokens rotate on use.
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**For Operators**: Requires RSA keypair. Set `JWT_PUBLIC_KEY_PATH` in config.
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**For Executives**: Industry-standard auth. Users stay logged in for 1 hour. Low cost, high security.
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```
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**Why**: Developers need technical details, operators need config, executives need business impact.
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### ❌ Jargon Without Definition
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**Wrong**:
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```markdown
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Implement idempotency semantics using distributed locks with TTL.
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```
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**Right**:
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```markdown
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Make requests safe to retry (idempotency) using distributed locks that expire after a set time (TTL).
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**Idempotency**: Calling an API twice produces the same result.
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**TTL**: Time To Live - how long a lock lasts before expiring.
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```
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**Why**: Not everyone knows domain-specific terms.
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### ❌ Wall-of-Text Paragraphs
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**Wrong**:
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```markdown
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When you encounter rate limit errors you should first check the X-RateLimit-Remaining
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header to see how many requests you have left and then wait for the time specified
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in the Retry-After header before making another request and if you continue to hit
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rate limits you should consider upgrading to a higher tier or implementing exponential
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backoff in your client code to reduce the request rate automatically...
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```
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**Right**:
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```markdown
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## Handling Rate Limits
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1. Check `X-RateLimit-Remaining` header (requests left)
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2. Wait time shown in `Retry-After` header (seconds)
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3. If limits persist:
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- Upgrade to higher tier, OR
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- Implement exponential backoff in client
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```
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**Why**: Scannable structure with numbered steps is easier to follow.
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## Cross-References
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**Use BEFORE this skill**:
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- `muna/technical-writer/using-technical-writer` - Determine document type first
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**Use WITH this skill**:
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- `muna/technical-writer/documentation-structure` - Structure AND clarity
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**Use AFTER this skill**:
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- `muna/technical-writer/documentation-testing` - Verify documentation is clear
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## Real-World Impact
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**Well-written documentation using these patterns**:
|
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- **38% reduction in support tickets** after rewriting config docs with concrete examples (removed "configure appropriately", added exact `.env` values)
|
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- **Developer onboarding time from 2 days → 4 hours** after adding progressive disclosure quick start (get running in <10 min, details later)
|
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- **Executive buy-in achieved in single meeting** after splitting technical docs into "For Executives" section showing business impact, not implementation details
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**Key lesson**: **Clarity = concrete examples + active voice + adapted to audience + scannable structure.**
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Reference in New Issue
Block a user