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"criteria": [
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{
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"name": "Headline Clarity",
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"description": "Can audience understand the core message in 10 seconds?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "No clear headline, or headline is vague/generic. Reader doesn't know what message is about.",
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"2": "Headline exists but is vague or buries key insight. Requires reading body to understand point.",
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"3": "Headline clearly states topic and general direction. Reader gets gist but not full insight.",
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"4": "Headline captures core message with specificity. Reader understands essence without reading body.",
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"5": "Compelling headline that captures essence, creates curiosity, and uses concrete specifics. Impossible to misunderstand."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"Headline is generic ('Q3 Update', 'Project Status')",
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"Can't summarize message in one sentence",
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"Headline describes format not content ('Memo on X' vs 'We should do X because Y')",
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"Buries insight in paragraph 3 instead of headline"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Structure and Flow",
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"description": "Is narrative easy to follow with logical progression?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "No clear structure. Random collection of points without logical connection.",
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"2": "Some structure but jumps around. Reader confused about how points relate or what comes next.",
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"3": "Clear structure with distinct sections. Logical flow but transitions could be smoother.",
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"4": "Well-organized structure with smooth transitions. Each point builds on previous. Easy to follow.",
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"5": "Exemplary narrative arc. Points flow naturally, build tension/resolution, guide reader seamlessly from problem to action."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"Jumps between topics without transitions",
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"Key points overlap or repeat",
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"No clear progression (flat list of facts)",
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"Conclusion doesn't follow from body (non sequitur)"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Evidence Quality",
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"description": "Are claims backed by concrete, credible proof?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "No evidence. Claims without support. Asks for blind trust.",
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"2": "Minimal evidence. Vague statements ('studies show', 'many customers') without specifics.",
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"3": "Adequate evidence. Some data/examples provided but missing sources or context.",
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"4": "Strong evidence. Specific data with sources, concrete examples, comparisons for context.",
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"5": "Comprehensive proof. Multiple evidence types (quantitative, qualitative, examples), sources cited, limitations acknowledged."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"Unsourced claims ('experts agree', 'industry standard')",
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"Cherry-picked data without showing full picture",
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"Anecdotes presented as data ('one customer said' as proof of trend)",
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"No comparisons (data without context)"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Audience Fit",
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"description": "Is message tailored to audience's expertise, concerns, and constraints?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "Wrong audience fit. Jargon for non-experts, or dumbed-down for experts. Ignores their concerns.",
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"2": "Partial fit. Some mismatch in sophistication or doesn't address key concerns audience has.",
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"3": "Good fit. Appropriate sophistication level, addresses main concerns, reasonable length.",
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"4": "Excellent fit. Matches expertise, directly addresses concerns, appropriate tone and length, uses their language.",
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"5": "Perfect fit. Deeply understands audience, anticipates objections, uses analogies from their domain, feels personalized."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"Technical jargon for non-technical audience",
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"Oversimplifies for expert audience",
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"Doesn't address audience's stated priorities",
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"Length mismatches time available (5-page email for busy executive)"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Storytelling Techniques",
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"description": "Uses specificity, shows vs tells, humanizes data, builds tension?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "No storytelling. Dry recitation of facts or feature list. No narrative arc.",
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"2": "Minimal storytelling. Mostly facts with occasional story elements. Tells more than shows.",
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"3": "Good storytelling. Uses some techniques (specifics, examples, data humanization). Shows and tells.",
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"4": "Strong storytelling. Consistently shows vs tells, uses specifics, humanizes data, builds some tension.",
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"5": "Masterful storytelling. Vivid specifics, shows throughout, data becomes human stories, tension and resolution arc."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"Uses generalities instead of specifics ('many', 'significant', 'improved')",
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"Tells instead of shows ('this is great' vs concrete evidence it's great)",
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"Data dump without interpretation or humanization",
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"No narrative arc (flat delivery of information)"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Accountability and Honesty",
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"description": "Takes ownership, acknowledges risks/limitations, no blame-shifting?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "No accountability. Passive voice, blame-shifting, or hiding responsibility.",
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"2": "Weak accountability. Some ownership but uses weasel words or deflects.",
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"3": "Adequate accountability. Takes responsibility, but doesn't fully acknowledge limitations.",
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"4": "Strong accountability. Clear ownership, acknowledges risks and limitations honestly.",
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"5": "Exemplary accountability. Named ownership, vulnerable honesty about uncertainties, acknowledges past mistakes if relevant."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"Passive voice hides actors ('mistakes were made' vs 'I made mistakes')",
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"Blame external factors without acknowledging internal role",
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"Overconfident claims without acknowledging uncertainties",
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"Misleading by omission (hiding risks or downsides)"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Actionability (Call-to-Action)",
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"description": "Is CTA clear, specific, achievable, and time-bound?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "No CTA, or completely vague ('think about it', 'be better').",
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"2": "CTA exists but vague or passive. Unclear what to do or who should do it.",
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"3": "Clear CTA but missing timeline, owner, or specifics on how to do it.",
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"4": "Strong CTA. Specific action, clear owner, deadline, achievable.",
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"5": "Perfect CTA. Specific, achievable, time-bound, clear owner, low-friction next step provided (link, meeting invite, etc)."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"No action requested (information without purpose)",
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"Vague ask ('let's improve X')",
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"No timeline ('eventually', 'soon')",
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"No owner (unclear who should act)",
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"Too many asks (confusing priority)"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Tone Appropriateness",
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"description": "Does tone match situation (crisis, celebration, persuasion, etc)?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "Tone completely wrong. Casual for crisis, or somber for celebration.",
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"2": "Tone somewhat off. Misreads situation or audience expectations.",
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"3": "Tone mostly appropriate. Minor mismatches but generally fits.",
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"4": "Tone fits well. Appropriate formality, urgency, and emotion for situation.",
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"5": "Tone perfect. Nuanced match to situation, builds appropriate emotional connection, feels authentic."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"Inappropriate levity in crisis",
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"Overly formal for casual announcement",
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"Defensive tone when accountability needed",
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"Hype/marketing speak for internal honest conversation"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Transparency",
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"description": "Are assumptions, data sources, and limitations explicit?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "Opaque. No visibility into how conclusions reached, what's assumed, or data sources.",
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"2": "Minimal transparency. Some info provided but key assumptions or limitations hidden.",
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"3": "Adequate transparency. Main assumptions and sources stated, but some gaps.",
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"4": "High transparency. Assumptions explicit, sources cited, limitations acknowledged.",
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"5": "Full transparency. Shows work, cites sources, states assumptions, acknowledges limitations, distinguishes facts from speculation."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"Unsourced data ('research shows')",
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"Unstated assumptions (e.g., market stays stable)",
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"No acknowledgment of limitations or uncertainties",
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"Facts and speculation mixed without distinction"
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]
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},
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{
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"name": "Credibility",
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"description": "Does narrative build trust through vulnerability, track record, or expert validation?",
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"scoring": {
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"1": "No credibility signals. Asks for trust without earning it.",
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"2": "Weak credibility. Some signals (e.g., 'trust me') but not substantiated.",
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"3": "Adequate credibility. Track record or external validation mentioned.",
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"4": "Strong credibility. Combines multiple signals: vulnerability, track record, expert validation, data transparency.",
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"5": "Exceptional credibility. Vulnerable honesty, demonstrated track record, expert validation, shows calibration (past predictions vs outcomes)."
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},
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"red_flags": [
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"No track record or validation provided",
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"Overconfident without acknowledging past errors",
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"Appeals to authority without substance ('experts agree')",
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"No vulnerability (appears infallible, reduces trust)"
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]
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}
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],
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"audience_guidance": {
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"Low-Stakes": {
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"description": "Routine updates, internal announcements, FYI communications",
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"target_score": 3.0,
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"focus_criteria": ["Headline Clarity", "Actionability", "Audience Fit"],
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"success_indicators": [
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"Message is clear and quickly understood",
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"Action needed (if any) is obvious",
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"Appropriate length for stakes"
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],
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"acceptable_tradeoffs": [
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"Can be more concise at expense of storytelling",
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"Less extensive proof needed",
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"Lower formality acceptable"
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]
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},
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"Medium-Stakes": {
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"description": "Product announcements, project updates, recommendations needing approval",
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"target_score": 3.5,
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"focus_criteria": ["Evidence Quality", "Structure and Flow", "Storytelling Techniques", "Actionability"],
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"success_indicators": [
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"Well-supported with concrete evidence",
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"Compelling narrative that engages audience",
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"Clear action and timeline",
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"Addresses likely objections"
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],
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"acceptable_tradeoffs": [
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"Some complexity acceptable if audience has time",
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"Can be longer if stakes warrant detail"
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]
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},
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"High-Stakes": {
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"description": "Executive decisions, crisis communications, investor updates, major changes",
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"target_score": 4.0,
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"focus_criteria": ["All criteria, especially Accountability, Evidence Quality, Credibility, Transparency"],
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"success_indicators": [
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"Comprehensive evidence from multiple sources",
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"Full transparency on assumptions and risks",
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"Clear accountability and ownership",
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"Builds credibility through vulnerability",
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"Anticipates and addresses objections",
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"Strong storytelling that builds trust"
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],
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"acceptable_tradeoffs": [
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"Can be longer if needed for completeness",
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"Extra formality for gravitas"
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]
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}
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},
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"communication_type_guidance": {
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"Technical to Non-Technical": {
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"description": "Explaining technical concepts/decisions to business stakeholders",
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"critical_criteria": ["Audience Fit", "Storytelling Techniques"],
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"key_patterns": [
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"Use analogies from audience's domain",
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"Focus on business impact, not technical implementation",
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"Translate jargon or define terms",
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"Show with concrete examples, not abstract concepts"
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]
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},
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"Executive Communication": {
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"description": "Board updates, CEO memos, investor relations",
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"critical_criteria": ["Headline Clarity", "Evidence Quality", "Transparency"],
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"key_patterns": [
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"Front-load conclusions (BLUF - Bottom Line Up Front)",
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"Quantify everything (revenue, cost, time, risk)",
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"Show vs baseline/target/competitors",
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"Acknowledge risks explicitly"
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]
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},
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"Customer-Facing": {
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"description": "Product announcements, incident communications, customer updates",
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"critical_criteria": ["Tone Appropriateness", "Accountability", "Actionability"],
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"key_patterns": [
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"Lead with customer impact (not internal process)",
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"Clear next steps for customer",
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"Empathy for pain points",
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"No jargon or internal acronyms"
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]
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},
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"Change Management": {
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"description": "Org changes, process changes, difficult news",
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"critical_criteria": ["Tone Appropriateness", "Accountability", "Storytelling Techniques", "Transparency"],
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"key_patterns": [
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"Acknowledge loss/pain (don't gloss over difficulty)",
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"Paint compelling future state",
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"Show path from here to there",
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"Address 'what about me?' early"
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]
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},
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"Crisis Communication": {
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"description": "Incidents, outages, mistakes, sensitive issues",
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"critical_criteria": ["Accountability", "Transparency", "Actionability", "Credibility"],
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"key_patterns": [
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"Lead with facts (what happened, when, impact)",
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"Take accountability (no passive voice or blame-shifting)",
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"State what you're doing (concrete actions with timeline)",
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"Commit to transparency (when they'll hear next)"
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]
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}
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},
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"common_failure_modes": [
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{
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"failure_mode": "Burying the Lede",
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"symptoms": "Important insight appears in paragraph 3 or buried in middle of long text.",
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"consequences": "Busy audience never sees main point. Decisions delayed or made without full context.",
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"fix": "Move most important insight to headline and first sentence. Use inverted pyramid (most important first)."
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},
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{
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"failure_mode": "Death by Bullets",
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"symptoms": "Deck with 50 bullet points, no narrative thread connecting them.",
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"consequences": "Audience can't follow logic, points don't build, no memorable takeaway.",
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"fix": "Use bullets to support narrative, not replace it. Each slide should have one key point."
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},
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{
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"failure_mode": "Jargon Mismatch",
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"symptoms": "Technical terms for non-technical audience, or dumbed-down language for experts.",
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"consequences": "Audience either confused or insulted. Message doesn't land.",
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"fix": "Match sophistication to audience. Define jargon when needed. Use analogies from their domain."
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},
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{
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"failure_mode": "Data Dump Without Interpretation",
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"symptoms": "Lists metrics without context or insight. 'Churn is 3.2%, NPS is 58, CAC is $1,150.'",
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"consequences": "Audience doesn't know what data means or what to do with it.",
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"fix": "Lead with insight, support with data. 'We're retaining customers well (3.2% churn is top quartile) but they're expensive to acquire ($1,150 CAC = 18-month payback).'"
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},
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{
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"failure_mode": "Vague Call-to-Action",
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"symptoms": "CTA like 'Let's be more customer-focused' or 'Think about this'.",
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"consequences": "No one does anything. Message dies without action.",
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"fix": "Specific action, owner, timeline. 'Sarah, approve $50K budget by Friday' or 'Each team should interview 5 customers by month-end using guide [link].'"
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},
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{
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"failure_mode": "No Stakes",
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"symptoms": "Recommendation without showing cost of inaction. 'We should improve X.'",
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"consequences": "Audience doesn't prioritize. Request ignored in favor of urgent items.",
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"fix": "Show opportunity cost. 'Page load time is 2.5s, costing us 30% of conversions ($800K annually). Optimizing to 1s recovers $240K in year 1.'"
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},
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{
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"failure_mode": "Correlation as Causation",
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"symptoms": "Claims causal relationship based on correlation. 'Feature X increased, then revenue grew, so X caused growth.'",
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"consequences": "Wrong decisions based on spurious relationships. Waste resources on non-drivers.",
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"fix": "Be explicit about causation vs correlation. If claiming causation, show mechanism or use causal inference methods."
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},
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{
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"failure_mode": "Passive Voice Hiding Accountability",
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"symptoms": "'Mistakes were made', 'The decision was reached', 'It was determined that...'",
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"consequences": "Erodes trust. Audience doesn't know who's responsible or in control.",
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"fix": "Use active voice with named actors. 'I made mistakes', 'The exec team decided', 'Based on our analysis, I recommend...'"
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}
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],
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"scale": 5,
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"minimum_average_score": 3.5,
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"interpretation": {
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"1.0-2.0": "Inadequate. Major issues with clarity, evidence, or audience fit. Do not deliver. Revise significantly.",
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"2.0-3.0": "Needs improvement. Basic structure present but weak evidence, poor storytelling, or mismatched tone. Acceptable only for low-stakes FYI messages.",
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"3.0-3.5": "Acceptable. Clear message with adequate evidence. Suitable for routine communications and internal updates.",
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"3.5-4.0": "Good. Compelling narrative with strong evidence and clear action. Suitable for medium-stakes product announcements, recommendations.",
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"4.0-5.0": "Excellent. Masterful storytelling, comprehensive evidence, builds credibility and trust. Suitable for high-stakes executive/crisis/customer communications."
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}
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}
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