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name: cw-story-critique
description: Creative writing skill for analyzing and critiquing story content. Use when the user requests feedback, critique, or analysis of their writing. Provides balanced feedback calibrated to intended audience.
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# Story Critique
Analyze story content and provide constructive feedback.
## Process
### 1. Understand Context First
Always ask about audience and goals before critiquing:
```
Before I critique this, help me understand:
1. Target audience? (YA, adult, genre, platform)
2. What feedback are you looking for? (big picture, line-level, both, harsh-only)
3. Draft stage? (early = focus on major issues, later = details OK)
```
If user doesn't provide context, infer from content or ask targeted follow-ups.
### 2. Adapt Structure to Story Needs
**Don't force rigid templates.** Each story needs different things:
- Sometimes extensive character analysis, minimal plot discussion
- Sometimes pacing is the main issue and everything else works
- Sometimes prose quality overshadows other concerns
**Common areas to consider** (not mandatory):
- Plot & structure (causation, stakes, logic)
- Character (motivation, consistency, agency)
- Pacing & flow
- Dialogue
- Prose quality
- Genre/audience fit
See `references/critique-areas.md` for detailed breakdowns - this is a reference, not a checklist.
### 3. Trust Your Analysis
**Notice what matters, not just what's listed.** If something affects the story but isn't in any reference guide, say it:
- Unusual structural choices
- Tonal issues
- Thematic confusion
- Unique voice elements
- Anything else relevant
### 4. Use Web Search When Helpful
Search when you'd benefit from:
- Genre convention verification
- Narrative technique terminology
- How similar stories handled challenges
- Fact checking
- Craft advice on specific techniques
### 5. Calibrate to Context
- Early draft → big picture issues
- Later draft → line-level details OK
- Genre matters (thriller vs literary, fanfic vs traditional)
- Platform matters (web serial needs hooks, traditional needs opening, fanfic needs canon adherence)
## Output Modes
**Balanced** (default): Strengths + areas for improvement + priorities
**Harsh** (if requested): Focus on problems, minimize or skip strengths section
**Flexible**: Whatever structure serves this story best
## Skills are Composable
Feel free to combine with other skills when helpful - e.g., using cw-official-docs to check canon accuracy during critique.

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# Critique Areas Reference
This is a reference guide for common areas to examine when critiquing fiction. **This is not a mandatory checklist** - use your judgment about what matters for each story.
## Plot & Structure
**What to examine:**
- Story structure (three-act, episodic, etc.)
- Cause and effect chains
- Pacing (too slow, too fast, uneven)
- Scene purposes (what changes in each scene?)
- Setup and payoff
- Plot holes and logic gaps
- Stakes and tension
- Beginning hook, middle momentum, ending resolution
**Common issues:**
- Saggy middle (lack of momentum)
- Rushed ending
- Scenes without purpose
- Deus ex machina
- Convenient coincidences
- Stakes not clear
- Characters know things they shouldn't
- Timeline inconsistencies
## Character Development
**What to examine:**
- Character motivations (why they do things)
- Consistency of personality and voice
- Character agency (do they drive the plot?)
- Complexity (flaws, contradictions, depth)
- Character arcs (growth, change, resistance to change)
- Relationships (believable dynamics)
- Distinct voices (can you tell characters apart?)
**Common issues:**
- Reactive protagonist (things happen TO them, not driven BY them)
- Flat arc (no change or growth when one is expected)
- Inconsistent characterization
- Characters acting for plot convenience
- All characters sound the same
- Unmotivated actions
- Sudden personality changes without explanation
## Pacing & Flow
**What to examine:**
- Scene momentum (does story move forward?)
- Chapter pacing (fast/slow appropriate to content?)
- Transitions (smooth between scenes/time?)
- Balance (summary vs scene, action vs reflection)
- Dead space (sections that drag)
- Chapter hooks (end on tension/question?)
- Information reveal timing
**Common issues:**
- Slow opening
- Info dumps
- Repetitive scenes
- Lack of scene variety
- Uneven pacing
- Flat momentum
- Scenes that neither advance plot nor develop character
## Dialogue
**What to examine:**
- Naturalism (sounds like real speech)
- Subtext (characters don't always say what they mean)
- Character voice (distinct per character)
- Purpose (moves plot/reveals character/builds relationships)
- Info-dumping (exposition disguised as dialogue)
- Tags and beats (attribution clear?)
**Common issues:**
- On-the-nose dialogue (too explicit)
- Info dumps in conversation
- All characters sound the same
- Unnatural speech patterns
- Too much exposition
- Unclear who's speaking
- "As you know, Bob" syndrome
## Prose & Technical
**What to examine:**
- Sentence clarity and variety
- Show vs tell balance
- Filter words ("saw", "heard", "felt")
- Passive voice (excessive use)
- Word choice (precise, appropriate)
- Purple prose (over-description)
- Repetition (word choice, sentence structure)
- Grammar and technical errors
**Common issues:**
- Telling instead of showing
- Filter words distancing reader
- Monotonous sentence rhythm
- Unclear action/description
- Excessive adjectives/adverbs
- Weak verb choices
- Confusing pronoun references
- Repetitive sentence structures
## Audience & Genre Fit
**Genre-Specific Considerations:**
**Fanfiction:**
- Canon adherence vs divergence (as intended)
- Character voice matching source material
- Reader expectations for ships, battles, favorite characters
- Update frequency and chapter hooks (if web serial)
**YA:**
- Protagonist age-appropriate
- Pacing fast enough
- Romance/relationships age-appropriate
- Coming-of-age themes
**Literary Fiction:**
- Prose quality high
- Thematic depth
- Character complexity
- Subtlety over explicit
**Web Serial:**
- Chapter hooks and cliffhangers
- Consistent posting structure
- Reader engagement hooks
- Pacing for serial format
**Traditional Publishing:**
- Opening hook strong
- Pacing professional
- Meets genre expectations
- Marketability
**Fantasy/Sci-Fi:**
- Worldbuilding clear but not info-dumpy
- Magic/tech systems consistent
- Lore revealed naturally
- Balancing exposition with story
**Thriller/Mystery:**
- Pacing maintains tension
- Clues planted fairly
- Red herrings work
- Satisfying resolution
**Romance:**
- Relationship development central
- Chemistry between leads
- Satisfying romantic arc
- Genre-appropriate heat level
## Universal Craft Principles
These apply regardless of genre:
**Emotional Resonance:**
- Reader can connect with characters
- Emotional beats land
- Stakes feel meaningful
- Tension exists
**Clarity:**
- Reader can follow what's happening
- Scene goals are clear
- Action is comprehensible
- Transitions work
**Consistency:**
- World rules stay stable
- Character abilities don't fluctuate randomly
- Timeline makes sense
- Tone remains appropriate
**Purpose:**
- Scenes have reason to exist
- Details serve the story
- Nothing feels arbitrary
- Reader trusts the author
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**Remember:** This is a reference, not a prescription. Some stories will have issues not listed here. Some listed issues won't apply to certain stories. Trust your judgment.