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Executive Communication Skill
Expert patterns for C-suite communication, board reports, and executive presentations
Core Principles
- Bottom Line Up Front (BLUF): Lead with the conclusion
- Pyramid Principle: Structure from conclusion to supporting details
- Clarity Over Cleverness: Simple, direct language wins
- Action-Oriented: Every communication drives decisions
- Data-Driven Stories: Numbers need context and narrative
The Pyramid Principle (Barbara Minto)
Structure Template
[CONCLUSION]
├── [Key Point 1]
│ ├── Supporting fact A
│ ├── Supporting fact B
│ └── Supporting fact C
├── [Key Point 2]
│ ├── Supporting fact A
│ ├── Supporting fact B
│ └── Supporting fact C
└── [Key Point 3]
├── Supporting fact A
├── Supporting fact B
└── Supporting fact C
Application Rules
Start with the answer:
- Executive summary contains the conclusion
- First paragraph states the recommendation
- First slide shows the outcome
Group ideas logically:
- 3-5 major points (never more than 7)
- Each point supports the conclusion
- Similar ideas grouped together
- Logic flows naturally
Order for impact:
- Most important first
- Chronological when telling a story
- Structural when describing a system
- Comparative when evaluating options
Example: Poor vs Good Structure
Poor (Bottom-Up):
We analyzed Q3 sales data...
Customer feedback showed...
Market trends indicate...
Competitor pricing was...
Therefore, we should expand to Asia.
Good (Pyramid):
We should expand to Asia in Q1 2025.
Why this makes sense:
1. Market opportunity: $2.5B addressable market growing 15% YoY
2. Competitive advantage: Our tech is 2 years ahead
3. Financial viability: 18-month payback, 35% IRR
Supporting data...
Executive Writing Style
Language Guidelines
Use:
- Short sentences (15-20 words average)
- Active voice ("We increased sales" not "Sales were increased")
- Strong verbs (achieved, delivered, accelerated)
- Concrete nouns (revenue, customers, market share)
- Present tense for current state, past for completed actions
Avoid:
- Jargon and acronyms (spell out on first use)
- Passive voice
- Weak verbs (have, make, do, get)
- Hedging language (maybe, possibly, could)
- Long paragraphs (3-4 sentences max)
Tone Characteristics
Confident without arrogance:
- "Our analysis shows..." (not "We think...")
- "The data indicates..." (not "It seems like...")
- "We recommend..." (not "You might consider...")
Objective with conviction:
- State facts clearly
- Acknowledge risks openly
- Recommend decisively
- Support with evidence
Respectful of time:
- Get to the point immediately
- Use formatting for scannability
- Provide detail in appendices
- Offer executive summary first
Word Economy
Before: "In order to achieve our strategic objectives related to market expansion, we need to implement a comprehensive action plan." (22 words)
After: "To expand market share, we'll execute this three-step plan." (10 words)
Before: "It is our recommendation that the company should consider pursuing an acquisition strategy." (14 words)
After: "We recommend pursuing acquisitions." (4 words)
Data Storytelling Framework
The Three-Act Structure
Act 1: Setup (Context)
- What's the current situation?
- Why does this matter?
- What question are we answering?
Act 2: Conflict (Problem/Opportunity)
- What changed?
- What's at stake?
- What are the options?
Act 3: Resolution (Action)
- What should we do?
- What will it achieve?
- What's the timeline?
Making Numbers Meaningful
Raw numbers are meaningless:
- "$2.5M revenue" - So what?
Add context:
- "$2.5M revenue (up 40% YoY, exceeding target by $500K)"
- "$2.5M revenue from 150 customers (average deal size $16.7K)"
- "$2.5M revenue puts us at 15% market share, #3 in the industry"
Use comparisons:
- Trend: "Revenue grew 40% YoY (vs 10% industry average)"
- Benchmark: "Customer satisfaction 4.8/5 (industry leader at 4.9)"
- Goal: "85% of target with one quarter remaining"
- Scale: "Our R&D budget ($10M) equals our top competitor's total revenue"
Storytelling Formula
Problem → Insight → Action → Impact
Example:
"Churn increased 5 percentage points to 8% (Problem).
Analysis shows 80% of churned customers experienced
billing issues within 30 days (Insight). We'll implement
automated billing validation and proactive customer service
(Action) to reduce churn to 5% and save $2M annually (Impact)."
Visualization for Executives
Chart Selection Guide
| Data Type | Best Chart | When NOT to Use |
|---|---|---|
| Trends over time | Line chart | When you have only 2-3 data points |
| Comparisons | Bar chart (horizontal) | When you have >7 categories |
| Part-to-whole | Pie chart (sparingly) | When you have >5 segments |
| Distribution | Histogram | For executives (too technical) |
| Correlation | Scatter plot | When causation is unclear |
| Process flow | Sankey/flow diagram | For quick decisions |
| Hierarchy | Treemap | When depth >2 levels |
| Status | Traffic light (RAG) | For detailed metrics |
Chart Design Principles
High-Level Focus:
- Show trends, not granular data
- Aggregate to monthly/quarterly (not daily)
- Top 5-7 categories only ("Other" for rest)
- Clear before/after comparisons
Visual Simplicity:
- Minimal gridlines (or none)
- One data series per chart (max 3)
- Large, legible fonts (14pt minimum)
- Direct labeling (avoid legends when possible)
- Clear title states the insight
Color Strategy:
- Green = positive, growth, on-track
- Red = negative, decline, at-risk
- Yellow/Orange = caution, attention needed
- Gray = neutral, historical, comparison
- Brand colors for company-specific items
Before/After Example
Before (Too Complex): ![Complex chart with 12 lines, small font, legend, gridlines everywhere]
After (Executive-Friendly): ![Simple chart with 2-3 key lines, clear trend, direct labels, title: "Revenue Growth Accelerating: +40% YoY"]
Board Report Structure
Standard Board Report Sections
1. Executive Summary (1 page)
## Executive Summary
**Recommendation**: [One sentence action request]
**Context**: [2-3 sentences on why this matters]
**Key Points**:
• Financial: [One key metric]
• Operational: [One key achievement/issue]
• Strategic: [One strategic implication]
**Decision Requested**: [Specific ask with timeline]
2. Business Performance (2-3 pages)
## Business Performance
### Financial Highlights
• Revenue: $X (+/- Y% vs target, +/- Z% YoY)
• EBITDA: $X (Y% margin)
• Cash: $X (Z months runway)
### Operational Metrics
• Customers: X (+Y% QoQ)
• NRR: X% (target: Y%)
• CAC/LTV: $X/$Y (ratio: Z)
### Year-over-Year Comparison
[Table showing key metrics vs same period last year]
3. Strategic Initiatives (2-3 pages)
## Strategic Initiatives
### Initiative 1: [Name]
**Status**: [On Track / At Risk / Behind]
**Progress**: [% complete or milestone achieved]
**Next Milestone**: [What and when]
**Investment**: $X spent, $Y remaining
**Expected Impact**: [Quantified benefit]
[Repeat for 2-4 top initiatives]
4. Risks and Opportunities (1-2 pages)
## Key Risks
| Risk | Impact | Likelihood | Mitigation |
|------|--------|------------|------------|
| [Description] | High/Med/Low | High/Med/Low | [Action] |
## Key Opportunities
| Opportunity | Potential | Timeframe | Investment Needed |
|-------------|-----------|-----------|-------------------|
| [Description] | $X value | Q1 2025 | $Y |
5. Decisions Needed (1 page)
## Decisions Requested
### Decision 1: [Clear title]
**Background**: [2-3 sentences]
**Options**:
A. [Option] - Pros: X, Cons: Y
B. [Option] - Pros: X, Cons: Y
**Recommendation**: [Our recommendation with rationale]
**Timeline**: [When decision needed and why]
[Repeat for additional decisions]
6. Appendices (as needed)
- Detailed financial statements
- Product roadmap
- Competitive analysis
- Customer case studies
Board Report Best Practices
Length:
- Total: 8-15 pages (not including appendices)
- Executive summary: 1 page max
- Each section: 1-3 pages max
- Font: 11-12pt minimum
Timing:
- Distribute 5-7 days before meeting
- Assume board reads in advance
- Use meeting for discussion, not presentation
- Prepare backup slides for deep dives
Tone:
- Balanced: Share good and bad news
- Forward-looking: More time on future than past
- Honest: Flag risks clearly
- Specific: No vague statements
Executive Summary Best Practices
The Perfect Executive Summary
Structure (1 page max):
## Executive Summary
### The Bottom Line
[One sentence: What are we recommending/reporting?]
### Why This Matters
[2-3 sentences: Context and significance]
### Key Findings
• [Finding 1: Most important]
• [Finding 2: Second most important]
• [Finding 3: Third most important]
### Recommended Actions
1. [Action 1 with owner and timeline]
2. [Action 2 with owner and timeline]
3. [Action 3 with owner and timeline]
### Expected Impact
[Quantified outcome: revenue, cost, time, risk]
Writing Guidelines
First Sentence Rule: The first sentence must be complete and self-contained. Reader should understand the purpose from sentence one alone.
Examples:
Poor: "This document outlines our findings." Good: "We recommend expanding to Asian markets in Q1 2025 to capture $2.5B opportunity."
Poor: "After conducting analysis, we have some recommendations." Good: "Our analysis shows consolidating vendors will save $5M annually with no service disruption."
Density Rule: Every sentence must add new information. No filler.
Poor:
We conducted a comprehensive analysis of the market.
The analysis looked at many factors.
Based on our analysis, we have recommendations.
Good:
Market analysis reveals three immediate opportunities:
European expansion ($10M ARR), enterprise pivot ($15M),
and strategic partnerships ($8M). We recommend pursuing
Europe first given our existing infrastructure and
18-month payback period.
Strategic vs Tactical Information
Decision Framework
Strategic (for executives):
- Direction and priorities
- Resource allocation
- Risk acceptance
- Market positioning
- M&A and partnerships
- Organizational structure
- Multi-year investments
Tactical (for managers):
- Implementation details
- Process improvements
- Tool selection
- Hiring plans
- Campaign execution
- Bug fixes
- Short-term optimizations
Filter for Executives
Ask: "Would this influence a board-level decision?"
Include:
- 10% revenue change
- Major customer win/loss
- Competitive threat
- Regulatory change
- Key hire departure
- Strategic pivot
- Capital requirements
Exclude:
- Individual feature launches
- Minor process changes
- Routine hiring
- Small vendor switches
- Team reorganizations (unless executive)
- Tactical marketing campaigns
- Technical implementation details
Aggregation Rule
Executives need aggregated, not granular data.
Don't: List 47 initiatives Do: Group into 5 strategic themes with progress
Don't: Show weekly metrics Do: Show quarterly trends with monthly granularity
Don't: Report individual deals Do: Report pipeline health and conversion trends
Traffic Light Reporting (RAG Status)
RAG Status Definitions
Green (On Track):
- Meeting or exceeding targets
- No blockers
- Within budget and timeline
- Milestones being hit
- Confidence level: High
Yellow/Amber (At Risk):
- Slightly behind target (5-15%)
- Minor blockers present
- Budget or timeline pressure
- Mitigation plan in place
- Confidence level: Medium
Red (Off Track):
- Significantly behind target (>15%)
- Major blockers
- Over budget or late
- Intervention needed
- Confidence level: Low
RAG Report Template
## Project/Initiative Status
| Initiative | Status | Progress | Key Issue | Mitigation |
|------------|--------|----------|-----------|------------|
| Product Launch | 🟢 | 85% | None | On schedule for Q1 |
| Sales Hiring | 🟡 | 60% | Slow hiring in Enterprise | Engaging recruiters |
| Cloud Migration | 🔴 | 35% | Budget overrun, tech debt | Adding resources, re-scoping |
### Details
#### 🔴 Cloud Migration
**Status**: Behind schedule and over budget
**Progress**: 35% complete (target: 60%)
**Issue**: Unexpected technical debt discovered, requiring additional engineering time
**Impact**:
- Launch delayed 6 weeks to March 31
- Budget increase: +$200K (now $1.2M total)
**Mitigation**:
- Added 2 senior engineers from product team
- Reducing Phase 1 scope by 15%
- Daily standup to unblock issues
**Decision Needed**: Approve additional $200K budget
**Confidence**: Can hit March 31 with additional resources
RAG Best Practices
Be honest:
- Don't keep things yellow too long
- Red is not failure, it's awareness
- Green doesn't mean perfect
Be specific about yellows:
- What specifically is at risk?
- By how much?
- What's the mitigation?
- When will we know if it's working?
For reds, always include:
- Root cause (not symptoms)
- Impact to business
- Mitigation plan with timeline
- Decision or support needed
- Realistic new timeline
Key Message Frameworks
The Rule of Three
Structure messages in groups of three for memorability.
Examples:
- "Our strategy: Grow revenue, reduce costs, scale operations"
- "Three risks: Competitive, regulatory, execution"
- "What we need: Capital, talent, time"
Why Three Works:
- Easy to remember
- Feels complete
- Doesn't overwhelm
- Creates pattern
The "So What?" Test
Every statement must pass the "So What?" test.
Statement: "Revenue grew 40%" So What?: "We're gaining market share" So What?: "We're now #2 in the market" So What?: "Positions us for strategic acquisition"
Keep asking "So What?" until you reach the business impact.
SCR Framework (Situation-Complication-Resolution)
Situation: What's the current state?
- "We have 50% market share in SMB"
Complication: What's changing or wrong?
- "Enterprise competitors entering SMB with aggressive pricing"
Resolution: What should we do?
- "We'll defend with bundling and faster innovation"
Example in Practice:
Situation: Our customer acquisition cost is $5,000,
industry average is $3,000.
Complication: At current CAC, we need $150K LTV to
maintain 30:1 ratio, but our LTV is only $100K.
Resolution: We'll reduce CAC to $3,333 through content
marketing (reducing paid spend 40%) and improve LTV to
$120K through expanded cross-sell program.
FAB Framework (Features-Advantages-Benefits)
Feature: What is it? Advantage: Why is it better? Benefit: So what? (Business impact)
Example:
- Feature: "New AI recommendation engine"
- Advantage: "40% more accurate than current system"
- Benefit: "Increases conversion 12% = $5M additional annual revenue"
Executives care about Benefits. Include Features/Advantages only if asked.
One Message Per Slide Rule
McKinsey-Style Slide Structure
Every slide has ONE headline that is:
- A complete sentence
- States the conclusion
- Can stand alone
- Is action-oriented
Poor Headlines:
- "Q3 Results" (What about them?)
- "Customer Analysis" (What did you find?)
- "Next Steps" (What are they?)
Good Headlines:
- "Q3 revenue exceeded target by 15%, driven by enterprise growth"
- "Top 20% of customers generate 70% of revenue and have 95% retention"
- "Launch MVP in Q1, then iterate based on enterprise feedback"
Slide Content Rules
Maximum per slide:
- 1 main message (in headline)
- 3-5 supporting points
- 1 chart or visual
- 50 words of text
Minimum font sizes:
- Headline: 28-32pt
- Body text: 18-24pt
- Chart labels: 14-16pt
White space:
- 30-40% of slide should be empty
- Breathing room around elements
- Not every pixel needs content
Visual Hierarchy
Most important → Least important:
- Headline (largest, top)
- Key visual or number
- Supporting points
- Details/footnotes (smallest, bottom)
Example Layout:
[HEADLINE: Revenue Growth Accelerating]
← 32pt, bold
[CHART: Quarterly Revenue Trend]
← Large, clear
• Enterprise segment +65% YoY ← 20pt
• SMB segment +25% YoY
• Services revenue doubled
Source: Internal analysis ← 12pt, gray
Best Practices Checklist
Before You Write
- Know your audience (board, CEO, CFO, etc.)
- Understand the decision to be made
- Have data to support recommendations
- Know the timeline/deadline
- Clarify format expectations (memo, deck, report)
Executive Summary
- Bottom line in first sentence
- Fits on one page
- Contains recommendation
- Quantifies impact
- Includes timeline
Structure
- Pyramid principle applied
- Most important information first
- Logical flow of ideas
- Clear section headers
- Page numbers and dates
Writing Style
- Active voice (>90% of sentences)
- Short sentences (<20 words average)
- Simple words (8th grade reading level)
- No jargon or spelled-out acronyms
- Consistent formatting
Data and Visuals
- Numbers contextualized (vs target, vs prior period)
- Charts support key messages
- Visuals are executive-friendly (simple, clear)
- Sources cited
- RAG status where appropriate
Recommendations
- Clear and specific
- Actionable
- Owner assigned
- Timeline included
- Resources needed identified
Final Review
- Passes "So What?" test
- Can be scanned in 2 minutes
- Comprehensive but concise
- Proofread (zero typos)
- Formatted consistently
Common Mistakes to Avoid
Mistake 1: Burying the Lead
Wrong: Start with background, methodology, then conclusion at end Right: Start with conclusion, support with key points, background in appendix
Mistake 2: Too Much Detail
Wrong: Include every finding, every data point Right: Include top 3-5 insights, put rest in appendix
Mistake 3: Weak Recommendations
Wrong: "We should consider exploring potential options" Right: "We recommend expanding to Germany in Q2 2025 with $2M investment"
Mistake 4: Data Without Story
Wrong: Show 15 charts with no narrative Right: Tell story with 3-5 charts that build to conclusion
Mistake 5: No "Ask"
Wrong: Present information, no clear request Right: Specific decision or approval needed with deadline
Mistake 6: Wrong Altitude
Wrong: Focus on tactics and implementation details Right: Focus on strategy, outcomes, and decisions
Mistake 7: No Risk Discussion
Wrong: Present only upside, ignore risks Right: Balanced view with risks and mitigation
Mistake 8: Vague Timelines
Wrong: "Soon", "In the future", "Eventually" Right: "Q2 2025", "By March 31", "6-8 weeks"
Templates and Examples
Executive Email Template
Subject: [Decision Needed] [Topic] by [Date]
[RECOMMENDATION IN ONE SENTENCE]
Context:
[2-3 sentences on why this matters]
Key Points:
• [Point 1]
• [Point 2]
• [Point 3]
Decision Requested:
[Specific action needed] by [date]
Impact:
[Quantified benefit or consequence]
Next Steps:
[What happens after decision]
[Attachments: Supporting analysis]
Board Memo Template
# [Topic]: [One-Sentence Summary]
**Date**: [Date]
**Prepared By**: [Name, Title]
**Recommendation**: [What we're recommending]
## Executive Summary
[Bottom line, key findings, recommended actions, expected impact - 1 page max]
## Background
[Context needed to understand the situation - 1-2 paragraphs]
## Analysis
[Supporting data and insights organized by theme - 2-3 pages max]
## Options Considered
| Option | Pros | Cons | Cost |
|--------|------|------|------|
| A | [Pros] | [Cons] | $X |
| B | [Pros] | [Cons] | $Y |
## Recommendation
[Our recommendation with clear rationale - 1 page]
## Implementation Plan
| Phase | Timeline | Owner | Investment |
|-------|----------|-------|------------|
| 1 | Q1 2025 | [Name] | $X |
| 2 | Q2 2025 | [Name] | $Y |
## Risks and Mitigation
[Key risks and how we'll address them]
## Appendices
[Supporting details, financial models, research]
Monthly Business Review Template
# Monthly Business Review - [Month Year]
## Executive Summary
**Overall Status**: 🟢 On Track | 🟡 At Risk | 🔴 Off Track
**Key Highlights**:
• [Most important achievement or concern]
• [Second most important]
• [Third most important]
**Decisions Needed**: [List any immediate decisions]
---
## Financial Performance
| Metric | Actual | Target | vs Target | vs Prior Month | vs Prior Year |
|--------|--------|--------|-----------|----------------|---------------|
| Revenue | $X | $Y | +/-Z% | +/-A% | +/-B% |
| EBITDA | $X | $Y | +/-Z% | +/-A% | +/-B% |
| Cash | $X | $Y | +/-Z% | +/-A% | +/-B% |
**Commentary**: [2-3 sentences on what drove performance]
---
## Operational Metrics
### Customer Metrics
- New Customers: X (+/- Y% vs target)
- Churn: X% (target: Y%)
- NRR: X% (target: Y%)
### Sales Metrics
- Pipeline: $X (coverage: Y.Zx)
- Win Rate: X% (target: Y%)
- Average Deal Size: $X (+/- Y% MoM)
---
## Strategic Initiatives
[For each top initiative:]
### [Initiative Name]
**Status**: 🟢 🟡 🔴
**Progress**: [% or milestone]
**Key Achievement**: [What was accomplished]
**Next Milestone**: [What and when]
**Risks**: [Any concerns]
---
## Key Risks and Opportunities
### Risks
| Risk | Impact | Mitigation |
|------|--------|------------|
| [Risk 1] | High/Med/Low | [Action] |
### Opportunities
| Opportunity | Potential | Next Step |
|-------------|-----------|-----------|
| [Opp 1] | $X | [Action] |
---
## Looking Ahead
**Next Month Focus**:
1. [Priority 1]
2. [Priority 2]
3. [Priority 3]
**Support Needed**: [Any blockers or requests]
Summary: Executive Communication Mastery
The Foundation:
- Start with the conclusion (BLUF)
- Use Pyramid Principle structure
- Write clearly and concisely
- Make data tell a story
For Board Reports:
- 8-15 pages max
- Executive summary on page 1
- Clear decisions requested
- Balanced (good and bad news)
- Forward-looking
For Presentations:
- One message per slide
- Headlines are conclusions
- Visuals are simple and clear
- 10-15 slides max for 30-min meeting
Always Remember:
- Respect your audience's time
- Answer "So What?" for every point
- Quantify impact when possible
- Be specific about recommendations
- Include timeline and owner
Version: 1.0 Last Updated: January 2025 Use Cases: Board reports, executive summaries, strategic presentations, C-suite communications